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Hello!My name is Angelina. I finished grade 8. In school, I trying to learn is well. My favorite subjects are russian, literature and history. Besides school, I'm in a music school. There I learn singing, playing the piano, solfeggio and music history. In this sphere, I am making progress and the plan is to go to music college. I want to become a music teacher and pass on their knowledge to others. I also have a hobby. Already a year I go to drama and I like the theater. In my spare time I like to spend for an interesting book. Read prefer fiction, classic novels and lyrics. And of course when I get time, I will devote a part of my family. My family is big and friendly. When we get together, we like to share news and interesting stories or play board games. There are many reasons why I want to study in England. I will list the main ones. Firstly I can visit the beautiful and historically important places. Secondly, I find new friends. More importantly, I will look into the history and culture of another country. Of course, I'll practice more in English. All this is very interesting to me. I hope that I will succeed.
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Когда стало известно, что я могу поучаствовать в этом конкурсе, все были очень рады за меня. Я не хочу разочаровать свою семью и это является отличным стимулом к победе.

Заранее большое спасибо!


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Hello! My name is Angelina. I have finished Grade 8. I try to learn well at school. My favorite subjects are Russian, Literature and History. Besides school I study at the music school. I learn singing, playing the piano, solfeggio and music history. I am making progress in music and planning to go to the music college. I want to become a music teacher and impart my knowledge to others. I also have a hobby. I've been going to the drama club for a year already and I like theatre. I like spending my free time with an interesting book. I prefer fiction, classic novels and lyrics. And of course I devote a part of my free time to my family. My family is big and friendly. When we get together, we like sharing news and interesting stories or playing board games. There are many reasons why I want to study in England. Here are some of them. First, I can visit beautiful and historical places there. Second, I will find new friends. Moreover, I will study history and culture of another country. Of course, I'll practice my English. All this is very interesting to me. I hope I will succeed.
When I learnt to know I would be able to take part in this competition everybody was 
glad. I don't want to disappoint my family and they encourage me to win a victory.

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