РЕБЯТ,мне нужно проверить ошибки! Исправьте,прошу. Last year in august we celebrate my...

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РЕБЯТ,мне нужно проверить ошибки! Исправьте,прошу.
Last year in august we celebrate my birthday party. It was in my house. I'm invite only my close friends,because firstly I celebrate with my family.
First we laid the table,decorated the room. At four o'clock my friends started coming. They begun to congratulate me and given gifts. I was glad to see them. I put flowers in a vase.After that we begun eaten fruits and snacks. My mother made a cake.
During the party we sang songs,danced,made jokes and spoke about our life,hobbies and future.By the evening of my friends from another town had to leave.But unfortunately they late the bus. My father agreed to lift them.
In the end me and my other guests went for a walk. Communicated and had fun.After that,everyone went home at nine o'clock in the evening. I am happy to have a good day with my friends. I enjoyed my birthday party.

Answer 1

The happiest day in my life is my birthday. I have my birthday on the 27th of December. Birthday is a very remarkable day for me. In the morning my parents come to my place and say, “Happy birthday!” They give me presents. I enjoy to get them. I usually have my birthday party at home. My parents and I prepare for this day. We invite my friends and relatives to the party. I usually celebrate my birthday on Sunday. I get up early in the morning. My father and I go to the shop and to the market to buy something we need for the party. My mother stays at home. She cleans the flat, makes cakes, lays the table and waits for the guests. I like this day. At four oclock my relatives and friends come to congratulate me and Im glad to see them. They bring flowers, books and sweets as birthday presents. I thank my friends. We have got a good holiday dinner on this day. Mother brings us a cake with candles on it. My friends sing the song: “Happy birthday to you” and I blow all the candles out. During our gay party we sing songs, play guitar, dance, make jokes, play games and speak our life and future. After having tea we dance, watch TV and tell stories and funny jokes. I enjoy my birthday party. My friends like this day too.