Ребят, проверьте пожалуйста. Правильно составил переводчик или нет??? Russian doctor...

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Ребят, проверьте пожалуйста. Правильно составил переводчик или нет???
Russian doctor physician, scientist, founder of the physiological direction in clinical medicine, public figure Sergey Botkin was born in Moscow to a merchant family on September 17 (September 5 st. St.) In 1832.
He was 11 th child in the family, was born of the second marriage of his father and was brought up under the supervision and the influence of his brother Basil. At an early age he was distinguished by outstanding ability and curiosity. The house Botkins frequented advanced people of the time, among them Alexander Herzen, Nikolai Stankevich, Vissarion Belinsky, Timofey Granovsky, Paul Pikulin. Their ideas had a great influence in shaping the worldview Botkin.
Up to 15 years of age Botkin was brought home in 1847, he entered the private boarding Ennesa, where he studied for three years. In the hostel, he was considered one of the best students.
In August 1850 Botkin became a medical student at Moscow University, graduating in 1855. Botkin only from its course is not passed the exam for the title of doctor, and for a doctorate.
Botkin died of heart disease on December 24 (December 12 st. St.) 1889 in Menton (France) and was buried in St. Petersburg.
In two marriages had been born 12 children. Two sons, Sergei and Eugene inherited his father's profession. After the death of his son Eugene Botkin Life became a physician at the court. Eugene Botkin was shot along with the royal family in 1918.

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The Russian physician, scientist, the founder of the physiological branch in clinical medicine and a public figure Sergey Botkin was born in Moscow to a merchant family on September 17, 1832 (September 5, old style).
He was the 11th child in the family and was born after his father's second marriage and was brought up under the supervision and influence of his brother Basil. At an early age he was marked by outstanding abilities and curiosity. The Botkins' house was frequented by distinguished people of that time, among whom there were Alexander Herzen, Nikolai Stankevich, Vissarion Belinsky, Timofey Granovsky, Paul Pikulin. Their ideas had a great influence on Botkin's views. To the age of 15 Botkin had been brought at home, and  in 1847 he entered a private boarding school, where he spent three years. He was considered to be one of the best students.
In August 1850 Botkin became a medical student at Moscow University, graduating in 1855. (Botkin only from its course is not passed the exam for the title of doctor, and for a doctorate. - вообще мысль не понятна)
Botkin died of heart disease on December 24, 1889 (December 12, old style) in Menton (France) and was buried in St. Petersburg.
In his two marriages he had 12 children. Two sons, Sergei and Eugene took their father's profession. After the death of his son Eugene Botkin became a tzar court physician. Eugene Botkin was shot together with the royal family in 1918.