Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение по английскому!) Earlier I very much worried about the...

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Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение по английскому!)
Earlier I very much worried about the figure. It wasn't pleasant to me, but over time it passed. On the first of December I got sick with usual quinsy. Only all these 3 weeks I ate nothing, only had tea, but a little. There was no desire to eat. During this time I lost weight much but still I thought that the full. Yesterday friends convinced me of the return. Many, with whom I communicated, pleasant my new appearance, but I still eat nothing. It frightens them and everyone speaks: "I want to feed you".

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Earlier I worried about my shape very much. I wasn't pleased with it, but over the time this feeling had passed. On the first of December I got sick with my usual quinsy. For 3 weeks I ate nothing, I only had tea, but just a little. I didn't feel very hungry. During that time I had lost a lot in weight but I still thought that it wasn't enough. Yesterday friends convinced me to come back. Many of them were pleased with my new appearance, but I still eat nothing. It frightens them and everyone says: "I want to give you some food".

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