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I think that every teenager around the world has a hobby and know what to do in your free time. Many girls like going window shopping and checking out the shop for new clothes. Boys spend a lot of time playing computer games and doing sports. In Irkutsk there are a lot of entertainment places which teenagers like to visit. One of them is 130 quarter. There they can watch a movie, go shopping, grab a bite to eat and just walk around and see the sights. During the week I don’t do much in the evenings apart from my homework, but on the weekends I usually go to the movies with my friends or walk and train my dog.

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I think that every teenager around the world has his own hobby and knows what to do in his free time. Many girls like going window shopping and checking out the shop for new clothes. Boys spend a lot of time playing computer games and doing sports. There are a lot of entertainment places which teenagers like to visit in Irkutsk . One of them is 130 quarter. There they can watch a movie, go shopping, grab a bite to eat and just walk around and see the sights. During the week I don’t do much in the evenings apart from my homework, but on the weekends I usually go to the movies with my friends or walk and train my dog.