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From a person's appearance, much depends. I think clothing affects a person's mood and underlines his character. For example, if a girl wears a dress and high heels, she will feel feminine. Her movements are smooth. When a person wears a sport suit, he wants to run and jump. Denim style that has many pockets, rivets and zippers gives a feeling of comfort and ease. Also clothing style may indicate man's belonging to a particular social group, such as emo, goth rockers or rappers. In general, the character and mood or affect his style or style affects a person.


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Much depends on the persons appearance. I think clothing shows a person's mood, underlines his character, alters his desires and feelings.

Also clothing style may indicate a man's belonging to a particular social group, such as emo, goth, rockers or rapers. In general, the character and mood affects his style or the style affects him.

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