Портфолио по английскому языку 8 класс письмо другу .Отзывчивые люди и у кого есть сердце...

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Портфолио по английскому языку 8 класс письмо другу .Отзывчивые люди и у кого есть сердце помогите прошу! Типа такого только на другую тему.
Dear Jack.

Hi! How are you? Sorry I've taken so long to answer,
but my computer broke down last week, and I only managed to get it
working today. Anyway, I'm really glad your sister is visiting London.

The
best place for her to go shopping is Cam
en Town in north-west London.
There is a huge variety of colourful indoor and outdoor flea markets,
international food stalls, clothes stalls, music stalls and street
vendors. There's nothing you can't find at Camden Market, from vintage
clothing to antiques, all at bargain prices! I was there last Saturday
with my friend Jill. She bought a beautiful embroidered handbag that
goes with all her clothes and I bought a pair of 70s style second-hand
jeans, some rare comic books for my collection, and a small leather
purse, all for £15. Can you believe it? After our shopping, Jill and I
enjoyed some Chinese rice noodles and sweet and sour chicken at one of
the food stalls............................................

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mistake здесь уместнее

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no, my befits anymore

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Че? хаха, no, my befits anymore?

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Во-первых, no, my befits better или more

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во-вторых, mistake is more appropriate

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И, вообще, зачем что то доказывать

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I do not have time on you

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I do not love such people as you, it is not even needed to squander time on them, all while)

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Прости, но тебе даже модераторы скажут, что ты пишешь неправильно. Я не хочу тебя обидеть, просто подучи англ. и возвращайся ;) повторяю, без обид!

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on be quiet))

Answer 1

Dear Ann, 

Hi! What's up? How is your health? 
You know, I'm in Berlin now and writing you straight from here!

Actually, I'm here because of my sister who is going to study in Berlin. This city is really nice and I'm glad to visit such an interesting town! I think that you know Berlin Zoo. It's really worth to visit and take a look at some animals. There are a lot of different parts in that zoo. You can see some rare kinds of birds, mammals and reptiles. Also, there are shops and restaurants, so you can eat something and buy some nice presents for your friends.
There are a lot places to visit in Berlin. They are Reichstag, Berlin Wall and Berlin Tower. Also, there are plenty of diffrent shopping malls, department stores and shopping streets, so Berlin is also very good for shopping.
Hope, you liked my story! Looking forward to getting your answer!

All the best,
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