переведите текст, пожалуйста! Я стала объектом вооруженного нападения, когда возвращалась...

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Я стала объектом вооруженного нападения, когда возвращалась домой незадолго до полуночи. Я успела заметить, что кто-то идет за мной, но не сумела избежать нападения. Ограбивший меня мужчина в ближайшие дни совершил нападение еще на одну женщину и был задержан. Я ходила в полицию на его опознание. Нападение на меня было снято на видеокамеру, установленную в находящемся на моей улице офисе одной фирмы, и против этого человека были убедительные улики. Он быстро сознался в преступлении. Завершение судебного процесса и приговор преступнику в виде более двух лет лишения свободы значительно облегчило мое состояние. Мое реальное восстановление началось только с этого момента.

Answer 1

I became the object of an attack, when I was returning home about midnight. I noticed that anyone was following me, but I couldn't avoid the attack. In a few days the man, who robbed me, attacked another woman and he was arrested. I went to the police to identify him. The attack on me was recorded by a CCTV camera which was installed at the entrance of an office, so there were conclusive evidences against this man. He confessed to the crime very quickly. After the legal process had been completed and the robber had been sentenced to two years in prison I felt much better. I had got a long recovery period after this event. 

Answer 2

I became the object of an armed attack, when I was coming home shortly before midnight. I noticed that someone was following me, but was unable to avoid the attack. In a few days a man, who robbed me, attacked another woman and was arrested. I went to the police to identify him. The attack on me was recorded on a CCTV camera installed at the entrance of one office, so there were conclusive evidences against this man. He quickly confessed to the crime. After the legal process had been completed and the robber had been sentenced to 2 years in prison I felt better. I had a long recovery period after this incident.

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извините, мне кажется Вы "потеряли" подлежащее >>> but was unable to avoid the attack

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"Kira attempted to catch them but was unable to and they fell to the floor." This sentence is taken from the original English story "Twin Foxes". As you see the writer doesn't use SHE before WAS UNABLE.

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I see, but at school we learnt that if you write BUT you must use SHE or HE (etc) once more))) I don't check your answers, I study English, you're much more younger than I, so your English is much more ""fresh"")))