When i saw New Yourk for the first time I was really excited. A lot of bright and huge buildings, skyscrapers. There were a lot of shops and big shopping malls. I thought:"i want to visit them all". This city is very different from mine. There are a lot of interesting landmarks. My favourite is the Statue of Lyberty. There are also a lot of beautiful parks. And people are very friendly and kind there. I really liked this city, and I wanna visit it again...
В первом, если что, много ошибок... В построении в предложений, в основном.