Правильно ли я написал это сочинение по англуHow I spent my summer holidaysSummer - the...

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Правильно ли я написал это сочинение по англу
How I spent my summer holidays
Summer - the holidays. My favourite season is summer. I love them very much awaited. However, I spent them badly. This summer was not remembered. All summer I stayed home. A couple of trips I went to the village. But there I did not like. There was no creature comforts. In the city I was watching TV, reading a book. Sometimes I was played in the computer games and walked. In the street I played football. Sometimes my friends and I went to the cinema. We were asked to read for the summer a few books. I read almost everything. Some of the books were very large. Some of the books I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted to go somewhere, but it did not. Hopefully next summer I spend a lot better. Если не сложно, напишите полностью исправленный текст.

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How I spent my summer holidays
Summer - the holidays. My favourite season is summer. I love them very much awaited. However, I spent them badly. This summer was not remembered. All summer I stayed home. A couple of trips I went to the village. But there I did not like. There was no creature comforts. In the city I was watced TV, read a book. Sometimes,I played in the computer games and walked. In the street I played football. Sometimes,my friends and I went to the cinema. We were asked to read for the summer a few books. (не поняла,что ты имел ввиду)I read almost everything. Some of books were very large,but some of them I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted to go somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer I spend more better.