I have a cat. Her name is Kenny. When I was 10 my mother brought her a kitten. She lives...

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I have a cat. Her name is Kenny. When I was 10 my mother brought her a kitten. She lives at home with us. She is grey,but there are some white spots. Kenny is very fluffy and funny. Sometimes she goes out for a walk. Kenny likes to eat fish and hates soup and porridge. She likes when I play with her,but she doesn't like when her tease. She lives with us for 2 years and our family likes her with her fun.
правильно?

Answer 1

When I was 10 my mother brought her as a kitten.
but she doesn't like when I tease her. 
She has been living with us for 2 years 
with her fun. - звучит чисто по русски, лучше заменить на very much.