Помогите,пожалуйста дописать сочинение ** тему: "К нашим возможностям и способностям мы...

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Помогите,пожалуйста дописать сочинение на тему:
"К нашим возможностям и способностям мы должны относиться серьезно"
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Many people think that we shoul take our skills and talents seriously. However, some think that talent doesn't make real difference, but only hard work does. Where is the truth?
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As for me, I think that... (своё мнение. The talent is important/ not much important. Два-три аргумента в свою пользу).
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On the other hand, many people say that...(Противоположная точка зрения. 1-2 аргумента в их пользу).
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However,...(опровергнуть противоположную точку зрения, доказать своё несогласие с их аргументами)
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To conclude, I should say that.... (переформулировать свою точку зрения. Сказать что-нибудь про себя, например, про свой талант)

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Many people think that we shoul take our skills and talents seriously. However, some think that talent doesn't make real difference, but only hard work does. Where is the truth?
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As for me, I think that talent is more important than hard work. When you are talanted in something it doesn;t take you much time but it rings usually a lot of pleasure. Talanted people can find new ways, they have brilliant ideas for usual things.
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On the other hand, many people say that hard work is more important because such people are more responsible they can reach their goals and organize thir life well.
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However allfamous and outstanding people were talanted in their work. For example there are many artists but only talanted become relly great. 
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To conclude, I should say that I try to recognize mytalents all the time, because it is very neccesary to know your talents and to use them in the right way!