Проверьте One night 14-year-old Sophia had a strange dream. In the dream, she was going down the street when someone grabbed her shoulder and pulled to himself. Then someone squeezed her hand! Listen to not come out to the party on September 15 it. Would be dangerous said old lady in a deep voice how did you know it asked Sophia ha smiled old lady I'm a which I see and now everything claimed she. Suddenly Sophia got up.she fielded terrifying which shouted she.her mother rushed to voice.what happens to you her mother asked Sophia was telling her mother about the dream her mother was surprised let's all stay at home this party doesn't mean anything suggest her mom. 15.9.10 Her family stayed at home but the Wilson family hit the big car accident Sophia always believe in her dreams that day on.
Вместо squeezed напиши compressed , а то выжимать так себе звучит .
Sophia was telling her mother about рассказать это не длительное действие , а однократное тут надо постваить в Past Simple.
страшноватая история xD