Скажите, есть ли грамматические ошибки в тексте?Plants and animals live around us! Some...

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Скажите, есть ли грамматические ошибки в тексте?

Plants and animals live
around us! Some live in the woodlands and rivers, others in the gardens and
ponds or even in the tiny spaces between grains of sand!

Humans are destroying
animals' habitats. To build more houses and roads they are cutting down trees
in woodlands. Litter in the streets harms wildlife and poisonous chemicals from
farms and factories are getting into rivers, ponds and lakes.

We must protect the
wildlife! Never throw any rubbish in the street and pick up any litter that you
see in woodlands, hedgerows and parks. We can build nesting boxes and also
create animals' habitats in our gardens and balconies.

Answer 1

No, ошибок нет))
МОЛОДЕЦ)))

Answer 2

Plants and animals live
around us! Some live in the woodlands and rivers, others in the gardens and
ponds or even in the tiny spaces between grains of sand!

Humans destroy animals' habitats. To build more houses and roads, they cut down trees in woodlands. Litter in the streets harms wildlife, and poisonous chemicals from
farms and factories get into rivers, ponds and lakes.

We must protect the environment! Never throw any rubbish in the street and pick up any litter that you see in woodlands, hedgerows and parks. We can build nesting boxes and also create animals' habitats in our gardens and balconies.
 






Заключение: всё правильно, но я добавил пару запятых, где нужно, заменил одну фразу на "environment", а также исправил три необоснованных использования времени Present Progressive на Present Simple.