2 see исправь на hear
4 had на have
5 i have no idea исправь на i dont have idea
6 large исправь на большой and исправь на with
7 does убери оно не нужно
8 did убери
9 him убери
10 wasnt very well замени на are bed или are not bad по твоему усмотрению можно и так и так