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Пожалуйста,помогите проверить сочинение(ЕГЭ). тема: most teachers believe that all subjects at school are equall useful.

Nowadays pupils study more than ten subject in school. Every teacher think that his lessons are very important. But it is really that all subject will be necessary in life . In this essay I am going to express my opinion and criticize my opponents.

I personally think, that not everything subject are useful. I think so because,firstly,if pupils has not propensity for engineering sciences,then studying for example physics will be for him waste of time. Secondly,if you will try to get on well in all subject you will must do a lot of homework for this reason you will have less time for sports activities and relaxation.

But there are people who think differently. They think, that every subject develop useful skills and abilities. In modern world very important be comprehensively developed person. Actually, they are sure that, if a child learn only humanitarian science it would be difficult for him, if he decided to get medical education.

However I can not support their point of view,because pupils who special emphasis place on discipline which like them achive more sucess.

In conclusion I would like to crown that I has just written. It is very difficult get on well in all subject in last year of study,because you should prepare for exams and focus your attention on definite discipline,which need for admission to university.

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most teachers believe that all subjects at school are equal useful. 

Nowadays pupils study more than ten subjects in school. Every teacher thinks that his lessons are very important. But in fact all subject will be necessary in our life . In this essay I am going to express my opinion and criticize my opponents. 

I personally think, that not all subject are useful. I think so because, firstly ,if pupils have not propensity for engineering sciences, then studying for example physics will be a waste of time for him. Secondly, if you try to get on well in all subjects you will have to do a lot of homework for this reason you will have less time for sport’s activities and relaxation. 

But there are some people who think differently. They think that every subject develops useful skills and abilities. In modern world it is  very important be a  comprehensively developed person. Actually, they are sure that, if a child learns only humanitarian science it will be difficult for him, if he decides to get medical education. 

However I can not support their point of view, because pupils who havespecial emphasis  on the discipline which  they like, they  achieve more success. 

In conclusion I would like to crown that I has just written. It is very difficult to get on well in all subjects in the last year of study, because you should prepare for exams and focus your attention on a definite discipline, which is  needed  for admission to university
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