пожалуйста проверьте ошибки : I really had fun summer. In the summer I went to Almaty...

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пожалуйста проверьте ошибки : I really had fun summer. In the summer I went to Almaty relatives. It was very warm, everywhere there were trees: apple pear apricot plum. We also went to Almaty park, there was a lot of fun. I really liked in Almaty.

Answer 1

I really had a very good summer.
In summer I went to Almaty to see my relatives.
It was very warm, there were many trees everywhere: apple-trees, pear-trees, apricot-trees and plum-trees.
We also went to Almaty park, there was a lot of fun.
I really liked Almaty.

Answer 2

I really had a merry summer. In summer I went to visit my relatives in Almaty. The weather was very warm, there were a lot of trees everywhere: apple-trees, pear-trees, apricot-trees, plum-trees. We also went to the Almaty park, there was a lot of fun. I really liked Almaty.