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Hello today I would like to tell about my family tree.
This is my granny.
My granny's name is Valentina.
She is а teacher of math.
Her 66 years.
And she is a prudent, curious, well-organized, and a little bit sensetive.
This is her spouse.
This is Valera.
This is my grandad.
He is a military.
Him 68 years.
He is a well-organized, confident and balanced.
They live in a marriage a lot of years.
They have 2 children: my aunt Sveta and my mama Yana.
This is my mama.
Her 41 years.
She is kind, calm, decisive and clever.
I have 3 brother: Valera, Andrew amd Alexander.
I am the oldest.
I love my family.

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Hello. Today I would like to tell about my family tree.
This is my granny.
My granny's name is Valentina.
She is а teacher of math.
She is 66 years.
And she is a prudent, curious, well-organized, and a little bit sensetive.
This is her spouse.
This is Valera.
This is my grandad.
He is a military.
He is 68 years.
He is a well-organized, confident and balanced.
They live in a marriage a lot of years.
They have 2 children: my aunt Sveta and my mama Yana.
This is my mama.
She is 41 years.
She is kind, calm, decisive and clever.
I have 3 brothers: Valera, Andrew and Alexander.
I am the oldest.
I love my family.