Здравствуйте, помогите пожалуйста проверить письма ** Английском ** ошибки, написали...

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Здравствуйте, помогите пожалуйста проверить письма на Английском на ошибки, написали очень много ошибок, но не пойму где, за раннее спасибо.
Anadyr
Russia
20.03.16
Dear John,
Thank for you letter. I was awfully glad to get it sorry, I couldn’t write sooner because I was busy at school.
So, in your letter you asked me what professions are the most prestigious in Russia. In my country the most prestigious professions are programmer, IT-specialist and lawyer, because they are the most highly paid professions in Russia. Kinds of money-making jobs in Russia, which do not require a university degree are driver, builder and seller. I want to go to college because that allows me to get the highly paid and interesting job in future.
You wrote that you are going on a three-day bicycle trip. Where do you go? Why did you decide to go on a bike? Can my brother go with you?
Keep-in-touch.
Your Nikita.
Вот второе
Anadyr
Russia
20.03.16
Dear Jane,
Thank for you letter. I was awfully glad to get it sorry, I couldn’t write sooner because I was busy at school.
So, in your letter you interested where I buy food, I usually buy food in the any grocery shop. I can’t exactly say what is the most expensive or the cheapest thing to eat in Russia, because in different regions different price on any products, but bread is not expensive in all regions. I prefer to eat in, because it is tastier, more cheaply and I always know who and how cooked my food.
By the way, is it hard to work as baby-sitter? How old is the baby? What is his or her name?
Write soon.
Your Nikita.

Answer 1

Thanks for your letter. I was awfully (замени на terribly) glad to get it. Sorry, I couldn’t write back at once because I was busy at school.So, in your letter you asked me what professions are the most prestigious in Russia. In my country the most prestigious professions are programmers, IT-specialists and lawyers, because they are the most highly paid  in Russia. Kinds of money-making jobs in Russia, which do not require a university degree are drivers, builders and sellers. I want to go to college because that can get me an opportunity to find the highly paid and interesting job in future.You wrote that you are going on a three-day bicycle trip. Where do you go? Why did you decide to go on a bike? Can my brother go with you? Keep-in-touch.Your Nikita.
 Вот второеAnadyrRussia20.03.16Dear Jane,Thanks for your letter. I was awfully (замени на terribly)  glad to get it. Sorry, I couldn’t write back at once because I was busy at school.So, in your letter you are interested in  where I buy food. I usually buy food in any grocery shop. I can’t exactly say what  the most expensive or the cheapest thing to eat in Russia is, because in different regions various prices on  products, but bread is not expensive in all districts. I prefer to eat in (скорее всего at home), because it is tastier, more cheaply and I always know who and how cooked my food.By the way, is it hard to work as baby-sitter? How old is the baby? What is his or her name?Write soon.Your Nikita.