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First, I am interested in some school subjects as English and German. I like to learn foreign languages,but it seems to me, that I don't know English very well, so I decided to go to British council school were we improve our skills. I like my parents job. They are making films. At the moment, my dad often organize different fests and concerts such as RHCP and Muse. From the childhood I wanted to work as a filter, but I didn't know which type of job I could choose. First, I wanted to become a producer, like mom. Soon, I understood that it's no time mine,cause I am not as responsible as producer should be. Now I want to become a director. I want to make music videos for famous singers and groups,because making films is to boring for me. I have venture could try myself as a flapper girl. Unfortunately,it didn't happen. I am going to take part in a film festival, where I will show my work, my short film. I can wine a cash price. I think director should be creative, sure and a good speaker to explain what they want. It also can be a well paid job,if you are a good director. But it can be a little bit hard and stressful job. To be a good director you should know everything in a little couple. A little film-montage director,a little scenarist, a lit leather operator. Actually, I think that my future job will be related with film
Тема my future job
Thank you!)


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I can wine a cash price. убери это предложение. а так ошибок нет.
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