Есть ли ошибки в этом тексте ? Исправьте . A year ago I visited Tobu World Square. It was...

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Есть ли ошибки в этом тексте ? Исправьте . A year ago I visited Tobu World Square. It was wonderful! I've seen tiny models of buildings such as the Colosseum,Versailles,the White house, Peterhof and many other buildings, monuments and attractions. In the Park everyone was taking pictures. Such emotions cannot be forgotten. I think everyone should visit Tobu World Square!

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A year ago I visited Tobu World Square. It was wonderful! I saw tiny models of buildings such as the Colosseum, Versailles, the White House, Peterhof and many other buildings, monuments and attractions. In the Park everyone was taking pictures. Such emotions cannot be forgotten. I think everyone should visit Tobu World Square!