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Modern technologies in our life.
I`d like to tell you about modern technologies and their influence on our life.
In nowadays, many various gadgets appear and opinions of different people about them are questionable. Some suppose that sophisticated gadgets are really useful and necessary, while others find them absolutely awful as they influence people badly.
As for me, I think new technology is very useful; I like the electronics and I`m an adherent of the various gadgets. I can`t imagine my life without mobile phone, televisions, computer and different electronic gadgets. I spend too much time using the computer. I read books there, search on the Internet, type text, watch films and listen to music. I also find mobile phone is very useful because it helps me to call with my friends in any time.
I`m absolutely sure of that the various devices make our lives easier and more interesting.


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1.many various gadgets=>various gadgets
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search on the Internet=> surf the internet
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I also find mobile phone=>I also find out, that mobile phone
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it helps me to call with=>it helps me to call
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sure of that the various=>sure that the various

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Некоторые приложения я изменил, что бы они красивее звучали, а так рассказ очень понравился, так как сам увлекаюсь техникой=)