Проверьте пожалуйста текст по англ,мне рассказать потом надо будет,просто.Спасибо заранее...

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Проверьте пожалуйста текст по англ,мне рассказать потом надо будет,просто.Спасибо заранее :) Once I knew(узнала) about one attraction in America and now I will talk about it.Niagara Falls is the most famous falls in America and one of the wonder of the world.Falls situated in? Niagara river and it is the heart of Niagara. It's very fantastic place.Almost one million tourists visit this attraction every year.With help of Niagara's falls people get more(много) energy. In a word, if Ihave a choice,I would visit this place.

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Может быть лучше сказать: Almost one million tourists visit this attractive place every year?!

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Once I knew about one attraction in America and now I will talk about it. Niagara Falls is the most famous falls in America and one of the wonder of the world.Falls situated in? Niagara river and it is the heart of Niagara. It's very fantastic place. Almost one million tourists visit this attraction every year. With help of Niagara's falls people get a lot of energy. In a word, if Ihad a choice,I would visit this place.