Проверьте пожалуйста текст,если необходимо допишите что либо) A few years ago,in the...

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A few years ago,in the summer we with my friend Alice went to rest in the village which is in Saulkrasty. It was not our first trip here therefore we with pleasure waited for arrival. In Saulkraty we bathed much, sunbathed, went into the woods to pick berries and were having fun.
Once we wanted to bake tasty bilberry pie , but as we had no berries, we decided to go for them a bit earlier in the morning.
The next day, barely dawn, we packed up and went into the woods. The weather was sunny.
The forest ,closest to the village, was familiar to us pretty good, so we were not afraid to get lost without a guide. However, while we were picking berries, we forgot about everything,trying to gather as much as possible. When the sun was hight, our baskets were filled up to the top. Places around was quite unfamiliar. We decided to go in the opposite direction, but still could not find the neighborhood.
We with Alice already rather were tired, but joked and encouraged each other. And suddenly towards us from the bushes raspberry came my dad. He explained that we made a hook and almost emerged from the woods, but on the other side of the village. Thus ended our adventure. A cake gone right wonderfully!


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Places around WERE quite unfamiliar. Множественное число.
We were both already tired but by making funny jokes we encouraged each other. Предложение составлено неправильно.
Suddenly, we saw my dad coming from the raspberry bushes. Предложение составлено неправильно.
...we made a LOOP...
In conclusion the cake turned out to be very tasty! Так звучит лучше.

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В целом не плохо. Только не понятно, что такое Saulkrasty. А так, интересненько))

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