Напишите эссе ** тему "Современная молодёжь" ** основе моды(одежда, ценности и т.п.)...

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Напишите эссе на тему "Современная молодёжь" На основе моды(одежда, ценности и т.п.) (Выражение собственного мнения)
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1)Вступление и постановка проблемы
2)Аргументы в пользу своей точки зрения (3 предложения)
3)Аргументы, доказательства в пользу противоположной точки зрения (контраргумент, 2-3 предложения)
4)Свой аргумент, доказывающий несостоятельность противоположной точки зрения.
5)Заключение, в котором вы еще раз подчеркиваете правильность вашей точки зрения (2 предложения)
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   Today it is fashionable to speak about teenage problems. A few years ago alcohol, fights, killings and other kinds of violence were more problems for adults than for young people.
     The first big  problem is to choose a good friend. I know the proverb "A friend in need is a friend indeed". I agree with it, that's why I try to make friends with gay and true persons. I want to have a friend who understands me. It will be simple and interesting to speak to him or her.

  It is a problem to get a good education. It is necessary to pay for a good education. I am sure that all teenagers want to have a lot of money to dress well, to go to the theatres, to visit foreign countries, etc. How can they solve all these problems? They have to earn money. I think it is possible to do it. Some boys wash cars, the others sell newspapers, some of my friends help old persons.
     I think that young people have problems with their parents. Sometimes we have different tastes.
     The most great problem among youth is using alcohol, drugs, tobacco smoking. The man, who use alcohol or drugs lose his strength for the will, he brings suffering to his members of the family.
   Now we are young people and we are the future of our country. Grown up's must remember that we are the future of our country and in present moment our character is formed and that's why our parents must not assert pressure on us.








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Отличная работа, спасибо большое! :)