Помогите проверить грамматику!!! My name is Rita. I'm 20 years old. I study on last year...

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Помогите проверить грамматику!!!

My name is Rita. I'm 20 years old. I study on last year at teachers training college.
I think my positive traits of character is: kind, friendly, sociable, funny, emotional. I really love people. I like to help you in any situations. If someone ask me to help him I gave up all of my deals and come to help him. I have many friends. I love big parties. It's so funny.
But my negative traits of character first of all is lazy. It's so hard for me to woke up every day in the morning. Sometimes I can't force myself to do something for example home-task or washing and so on. But I'm trying to change myself.
On my opinion the most important traits of character is kindness and joyous. When you are kind and joyous people are pleased to communicate with you with you, this is creates a good atmosphere.
But sometimes people can use your kindness. They are ask you something, knowing that you can't refuse. But this is not a reason not to be kind. You just need to be able to say no sometimes.

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1. По-моему, лучше будет так: "This is my last year at teachers training college". 2. As for my positive traits of character, I am kind, friendly, sociable, funny and emotional. 3. I like to help people in any situation. 4. If someone needs help and asks me, I give up all my business and come to help him. 5. I have many friends and I enjoy big parties very much. It's so funny! 6. Anyway, I also have some negative traits of character. To tell you the truth, I am very lazy. It's very hard for me to wake up early in the morning, for instance. 7. ... for example, a home-task on any subject, washing-up or the housework. 8. In my opinion, the most important traits of character are kindness and joy. 9. When you are kind and joyous, people are pleased to communicate with you and this creates a good atmosphere. 10. But sometimes people can use your kindness just to reach their own goals. 11. It happens when they know that you can't refuse and ask you for something.