Помогите исправить ошибки по английскому. My ideal school. I think in an ideal school...

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Помогите исправить ошибки по английскому.
My ideal school.
I think in an ideal school lessons should be fun and entertaining. Teachers should bet strict, but I understand. In an ideal school should be comfortable. tables must be tilted, that would be convenient to write. In idialno school children can choose additional lessons: astronomy, drawing lessons, etc. Lessons begin at 9:30 am and lasted 40 minutes. But there have to learn to children who want to learn and lessons for them fascinating. In an ideal school oktivnyh most obedient disciples praise and award prizes. This is my ideal school.
Оригинал: Моя идеальная школа.Я думаю в идеальной школе уроки должны быть увлекательными и занимательными. Учителя должны бэть строгими, но понимающими. В идеальной школе должно быть уютно. столы должны быть с наклоном, что бы было удобно писать. В идиальной школе дети могут выбирать дополнительные уроки: астрономия, уроки рисования и т.п. Уроки начинаются в 9:30 и длятся 40 минут. Но там должны учиться дети которым хочется учиться и уроки для них увлекательные. В идеальной школе самых октивных и послушных учеников хвалят и награждают призами. Это моя идеальная школа.

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Answer 1

My ideal school.
I think that lessons should be amusing and entertaining. The teachers shoud be strict, but understanding. It should be cosily in an ideal school. And the desks should be slanted for comfortable writing. In an ideal school, pupils can choose additional lessons like astronomy, drawing lessons and so on. The lessons start at 9:30 am and last for 40 minutes. But only pupils who want to study and who are interested in lessons should study there. In an ideal shool, the most active and the most obidient pupils are praised and rewarded by presents.
It's my ideal school.

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Это точно правильный вариант?

Answer 2

My ideal school.
I think in an ideal school lessons should be fun and they must entertaining. But I understand that teachers should be strict. An ideal school should be comfortable. The desks must be tilted to be convenient to write on. In an ideal school children must be albe to choose additional subjects, such as Astronomy, Art, etc. Lessons should begin at 9:30 am and last for 40 minutes. But there must be only those children with a wish to learn and their lessons should be fascinating. In an ideal school the wel-behaved pupils should be praised and awarded prizes. Such is my ideal school.

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А это точно правельный вариант?