Проверьте пожалуйста правильность написания текста! В Present Simple! Day my brother. He...

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Проверьте пожалуйста правильность написания текста! В Present Simple! Day my brother. He gets up at seven o'clock. then he puts on clothes and has breakfast. After breakfast
he goes to kindergarten at eight o'clock. He usually eleven o'clock at kindergarten. He comes home at seven o'clock. Then he has dinner. He eats chicken and potatoes. In the evening he watches TV. He goes to bed at nine o'clock

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Day of my brother. He gets up at seven o'clock. Then he puts on clothes and has breakfast. After breakfast he goes to kindergarten at eight o'clock. He is usually at kindergarten at eleven o'clock. He comes home at seven o'clock. Then he has dinner. He eats chicken and potatoes. In the evening he watches TV. He goes to bed at nine o'clock